Emily and the Oracle

Ah, thank you, you two! I will get to editing right away! There is something about this story that makes me sit back and relax and not think of anything. ...

Forgotten Legacy Book One; The Glass Staff I. There was a path by my house, on which I often wore down the soles of my shoes when I was confused ...

Wow, I really liked this! There are a few things I can catch that need a bit of improvement, however. In the balmy air Good, unusual adjective, but the rest ...

All was silent. Not the nice silence that makes you feel calm and comforted, but the dark eerie silence that makes you twitch nervously. The kind of silence that scares ...

Sorry guys, but these two chapters are really short, so I figured I might as well cheat and throw them together.>_> Critique them separately if you wish. Or get mad ...

This is a very interesting poem. It seems to hold a lot of...potential. However, I must nag you about a few things. Correct sentences. Yes, poems need these too. A ...

Hm...critique now, compliments later. After a few periods, you do not capitalize. This is a pet peeve of mine. L ost. S earching S craping away F eeling smaller W ...

Thank you so much you all

For When They Cry Beneath the surface it lies, Seething with turmoil, But it does not rise to face The storm waiting above. Sometimes the surface knows not What is ...

I absolutely love this! ((I was so excited I typoed every single word in that sentence...)) There is only ONE ((one!)) thing that bothers me. When Winter permits the, the ...

Ah, how excited I get whenever I see your critique, Esme. I will get to work right away! It's actually funny, because some of the things you mentioned rephrasing, I've ...

Wow, excellent! I found nothing wrong with this poem! (And if there is something, I probably missed it because I'm staying awake off of a gallon of coffee xD; ) ...

Welcome, myxqueengwen! I am very new myself, and I already enjoy this site very very much. I hope you love it, and the members, as much as I do! I ...

Chapter Three: Puppit The next morning my parents ordered the doctor to the house. After checking me over several times, and asking plenty of pointless questions, he stated I was ...

First off, I want to say, as room101 and mizz-iceberg already pointed out, this seems far too short to be a chapter. Unless you want a very short book (I've ...